I accidentally read the first three pages in the opposite order and the story was quite a bit stranger that way.
You mean “better in every possible way”.
So, the boyfriend is kind of a dick.
Better to know the BF is a jerk early on, now getting untangled, that might be a problem.
Now that’s just rude. sHOWING UP with a quest or whatever while they’re doin’ the do.
Man, you couldn’t get away with an opening like this in the current zeitgeist.
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I accidentally read the first three pages in the opposite order and the story was quite a bit stranger that way.
You mean “better in every possible way”.
So, the boyfriend is kind of a dick.
Better to know the BF is a jerk early on, now getting untangled, that might be a problem.
Now that’s just rude. sHOWING UP with a quest or whatever while they’re doin’ the do.
Man, you couldn’t get away with an opening like this in the current zeitgeist.